Thursday, October 05, 2006

OneWord - so little time [effulgent] (for Jay)

It is your heart that makes mine effulgent.

It is your eyes that make mine shine.

It is your voice that makes mine sing.

It is your wit that makes mine keen.

It is your hand that makes mine steady.

It is your step that makes mine light.

It is your love that makes mine live!

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Sorry it took me so long to post this! You know...server problems. 'Nuff said.

I like this raw idea quite a bit. I may be able to do something more with it. Thanks for a new vocabulary word, EDW!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

brilliant poetry-wonderful words-you can tell that they are very heart felt..you must be a joy for Jay,and Jay must be a joy for you-Good stuff:-)

Osquer said...

Thank you. Jay and I are a mutual admiration society!

Liz said...

It's one of my favorie words, ever. I'm glad you like it!