Monday, September 11, 2006

tanka (for Samual Spade)


When the sumac grow

directly out of the wall,

you're going to need

one of two things, either a

tree trimmer or a new wall!

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Here's a tanka for you instead of a haiku, Sam. I know you don't mind me varying forms.

3 comments:

samualspade said...

this is a great tanka(tanka you very much)...the wall needs help,though.

Lynn said...

wow!

Osquer said...

You're quite welcome, Sam.

I think the City really needs to do something about that wall before it collapses onto Carson Street.