Tuesday, August 22, 2006

haiku (for Jay)

The moment I let

my pen take up the subject

of you, I'll be lost.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

This was the first day.
Be happy for the morning
and it's new promises

J

Anonymous said...

Damn...

This was the first day.
Be happy for the morning
and it's new promise.

J

Osquer said...

What's one syllable between friends?

p.s. Good morning!

Paperback Writer said...

Lovely, haiku by the way!

You should have a writing series of haikus! This one would fit in perfectly!

Osquer said...

Hmmm, I do write about writing a lot. Here's an older one (September 26, 2005) I think you'll like:

The forgotten pen
emerges from the sofa
gasping poetry.

EDW said...

Oh, I love this one!