Friday, August 18, 2006

55 Fiction Friday

Salisbury…Iris rolled the word around in her mind like a toffee on her tongue. She fingered the key she had sacrificed so much to attain. She knew it unlocked a box and the box was in Solsbury and the contents of the box would change her life. She was as yet unaware how dramatically!

[FIRST] [PREVIOUS] (to be continued...)


Sam Spade said...

can't wait until next week

Paperback Writer said...

"....toffee on her tongue..."

That was a lovely bit of alliteration.

Osquer said...

"lovely bit of alliteration" that's a neat little internal rhyme.