Sunday, July 09, 2006

tanka - for Samual Spade

Why should I settle

for slipping into a bath

sighing eureka

when I could leap into a

lake shouting Jeronimo!

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Hope you don't mind me trying out a different poetic form this evening, Sam!

3 comments:

Sam Spade said...

My dear O...on the contrary,this tanka rocks!I am flattered to no end.Great words,thank you

Bea said...

LOL I'm diggin' the new style Osquer!

Osquer said...

Tanka - for when a haiku just isn't enough